Blog of my choice #5

In this blog, I am going to write about how my essay went from start to finish. The first thing that I had to do for my essay was to write a 500 word draft or outline. I chose to do a regular draft because it is easier for me. The first draft went pretty well for me because I got a perfect score because I completed that draft. With my first draft, I was told that I had a lot of work to do with my essay because it was completely different than what I had to write about in order to get a good grade on the final draft. My second draft, which had to be as long as the final draft would be, went pretty well as well. I thought that I had made the corrections that needed to be corrected on this draft, but according to my teacher in the conference I had to go to, I did the essay completely wrong again. It turns out that instead of doing an argument about two articles on the same topic, I did an argument on two different topics. This was not that good at all because I had to rewrite my essay all over again and I only had a week to do it instead of a couple of weeks. At least I was able to write my essay the right way on the second draft than on the first draft. After reading two articles on obesity, which was what I did my rhetorical essay on, I was able to write another essay. Hopefully I did really well on this essay, but who knows.